Tuesday, May 10, 2016


      1. Writing
        1-CLB5W Write a formal invitation for a group function (such as a company picnic, BBQ or potluck).
        1.Have you ever received a formal invitation to a big event? Look at 10 formal invitations here, and write down 5-6 expressions of politeness or formality. These may include unusual adverbs, key nouns and verbs, and passive verb forms. How are they different from an informal invitation?
1-Please join us.
2-Come to join us 
3-You are invited.
4-We are honored by your presence.
5-Invite to attend

2.Think of a group function with some details, and write a formal invitation appropriate to that event.
                                (Happy birth day)

Please join us to Celebrate my son's birthday party.

date: Thu, July 21.
time: 5:00 p.m to 9:00 p.m.
Location: 100 park way forest Dr.
Pleas RSVP to Omar 647-929-2146.


Version 2
Happy birthday
Please join us to celebrate my son's birthday.
 Date:Thu, July 21
Time:5:00 a.m to 9:00 p.m.
Location:303-100 Parkway Forest Dr.
Toronto M2J 1L6.
Please RSVP Omar 647-929-2146.





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    3. Ask yourself: Did you convey the intended meaning; use language and content appropriate and relevant to the situation; and express main ideas and supports them in some detail?

 They give intended meaning clearly and contents appropriately. Then reason,date, time, and location, all of these are necessary.






2-CLB5W Take notes from a pre-recorded telephone message (such as a company message about job openings, a message about a store’s location and hours of operation, or a message detailing a bus or train schedule). Include details for personal use.
1.Create a complete table of the store's information, and check it for correct spelling, formatting, etc.
Saturday:10:00 a.m - 9:00 p.m
Sunday:11:00 a.m - 6:00 p.m
Monday:10:00 a.m - 9:00 p.m
Tuesday: 10:00 a.m -9:00 p.m
Wednesday: 10:00 a.m -9:00 p.m
Thursday:9:00 a.m -9:00 p.m
Friday :  10:00 a.m -9:00 p.m
2.Write in one complete sentence a note to yourself on when you might visit the store this week.

I'm going to the Fair view Mall on  Friday  at 4:00 p.m.

3.Ask yourself: Did you include important points with accurate details; convey a clear message; and record details (such as names, addresses, numbers, dates, times and directions) legibly, with correct spelling and other standard conventions of capitalization and punctuation?

Yes.



3-CLB5W Write a note to an insurance company to cancel or change a policy and to request a refund.
1.View samples of insurance policy cancellation letters here. What are the key parts of each note? Is it important to include the policy number and date of termination? Write down 5-6 useful terms you could use.
. Effective date.
 .Insurance NO.
.Address of Company
.Policy Number.
.City, State, Zip.
.Confirmation.
.Refund.
.Name.

2.Write a cancellation note including all the important details.

February 01, 2016
Car Insurance Company: TD insurance.
Address of Company: Victoria Park St.
City, State, Zip :ON, Canada, M2j1111

Re: Policy Number :12333
Toronto, Canada, m2j1L6


Please take this letter as a formal request to cancel my car insurance policy and stop all charges for premium payments. Please make this cancellation effective as of 05/02/16. I am also requesting written confirmation of the suspension.  Please refund any and all unused portion of my premium.


Sincerely,
Omar Ahmed.
303-100 parkway Forest Dr M2j1l6.


3.Ask yourself: Did you convey a sense of audience in language and format and convey the message clearly?need to improve it.





4-CLB5W Write a paragraph to report a factual event or incident, such as an accident, a workplace incident or a burglary.
1.You just witnessed something bad happen, and you have to write a report on it. Look at this sample, and notice the tenses used and details mentioned. What words communicated time and logic connections?

One day I was walking in the park near my house. When I heard yelling and shouting between a high school student named John an 11 years old named Alex, who were also my neighbors. As I was walking by I saw the following.


2.Write a 50-word report on what you saw. Be sure to have an introduction, body, and conclusion.
DESCRIPTION OF THE INCIDENT:
Date: May 10 - 2016
Time: 4:00 p.m.
Location:125 parkway forest Dr.
Injury:left hand.


Details:
John and Alex were playing basketball, when Alex accidentally hit John with the ball his eye. John got angry on Alex and started calling him a bad player. That's when Alex started to use bad language against John and was rude verbally to him, John walked towards Alex and grabbed his arm and twisted it behind his back, that's when I had to call the police on John because Alex was only 11 years old. When the police arrived, John claimed that he was only helping Alex to get off the ground since he fell while playing, but he was grabbing him by the arm out of anger.



3.Ask yourself: Did you address the purpose of the task; express a main idea and support it with details; provide introduction, development, and conclusion in an adequate paragraph structure; provide accurate descriptions or accounts of events and adequate explanations where necessary; and use appropriate connective words?




5-CLB5W Write a letter or email to a friend to describe feelings about a new home town, English class or job.
1.What 3 things have you enjoyed the most, and what 3 things the least, in this LINC class? Give details for each. What tenses would you use to describe your experience and your feelings?

3 things I enjoyed it.
  • My teachers Joseph, respects everyone and help them. Plus he is professional in teaching English.
  • I met new friends in the LINC class, and they were all nice people and help each other.
  • List entertainment programs such as eating to gather, trips and festivals.
3 things the least it.

  • The computers it's old.
  • No Internet lines,Wi-Fi.
  • Sometimes the lessons are difficult .


2.Write an email to a friend, maybe someone in your hometown, about how you feel. Would you be more formal or informal with this person?


Dear Hind.
How are you, I miss you so much, I would like to inform you that. I began to  accustomed to the new cities,  the people here Nice and beautiful places where I invite you to visit me. I have become friends, but I miss our friendship very much and I hope to meet together soon.

3.Ask yourself: Did you convey the intended meaning; use language and content appropriate and relevant to the situation; and express main ideas and support them in some detail?
Yes.


6-CLB5W Take notes from an advertising flyer on products, features, prices and retail locations to inform shopping decisions.
1.Check out the brands and promotions at this shopping destination.
2.Someone has proposed to go on a field trip to the place in the next two months. Imagine writing a comment under that proposal, using full sentences, stating your position. Whether you agree or not, be sure to include details of stores, times, brands, discounts, locations, etc., to strengthen your argument. Check for accuracy.



Hi my classmates.
My friend works in the Fair view Mall. and gave me the announcement Michael Kors Shops.

 Michael Kors
Our address elegance.
On the occasion of the arrival of spring offers Michael Kors stores to its customers.
The Bags, wallets solid and luxurious features upscale than the beauty and harmony of your style with your attractiveness, Choose a bag that suits you to becoming scintillating on each occasion with fictional prices up to 70% of the offer is limited to one week from may 20 to may 27 the store opening times from 10:00 a.m to 9:00 pm.
Address: 1800 Sheppard Ave E, Toronto, ON M2J 5A7
Phone:(416) 491-0151
Hours: Open today • 10:00 AM–9:00 PM.



3.Ask yourself: Did you include important points with accurate details; convey a clear message; and record details (such as names, addresses, numbers, dates, times and directions) legibly, with correct spelling and other standard conventions of capitalization and punctuation?

Yes.





































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